Abstract:
This study, titled "Mitigating the Effect of ‘Broken’ English in Academic Writing:
Theatre for Development as Intervention," investigated the frequency and impact of
‘Broken’ English on academic writing at Peki Senior High Technical School in the
Volta Region, Ghana. The research identified ‘Broken’ English as a significant
linguistic challenge that hindered effective communication, comprehension, and
academic performance among students. The persistent use of non-standard English in
students' written work resulted in grammatical inconsistencies, improper sentence
structure, and reduced clarity, ultimately affecting their academic success.
Using a qualitative research approach, the study explored Theatre for Development
(TfD) as an innovative and culturally relevant pedagogical intervention to address these
linguistic challenges. TfD integrated drama, role-playing, and interactive performances
to foster students’ language proficiency and cultural awareness. This approach allowed
students to engage actively in the learning process by visualising language-related
errors, reenacting corrective measures, and participating in discussions that reinforced
the principles of Standard English usage. The intervention highlighted the contextual
relevance of language learning, bridging the gap between students' everyday linguistic
practices and the academic writing standards expected in formal education.
Data were collected through document analysis, Focus Group Discussions, interviews,
and direct observations. A sample of 30 students’ academic scripts was analysed to
identify linguistic patterns and challenges related to ‘Broken’ English usage. The TfD
intervention involved dramatised scenarios portraying common language errors,
followed by interactive discussions that emphasised correct grammar, vocabulary
usage, and writing conventions.
The findings revealed that the TfD approach significantly enhanced students’
understanding of Standard English grammar, vocabulary, and writing conventions.
Students who participated in the intervention demonstrated improved academic writing
skills, greater awareness of linguistic rules, and increased confidence in their ability to
express themselves effectively in formal contexts. Furthermore, the participatory and
engaging nature of TfD created an inclusive learning atmosphere that encouraged peer
collaboration and self-expression, reinforcing students’ commitment to language
improvement. The study also noted that students who were more conscious of the
negative effects of ‘Broken’ English made deliberate efforts to minimise its use in their
academic work, highlighting the effectiveness of awareness-driven interventions.
This research contributes to the discourse on language education by providing
actionable recommendations for educators, policymakers, and stakeholders to integrate
TfD into the school curriculum as a long-term strategy for improving students' language
proficiency and academic outcomes. Additionally, the study underscores the
importance of continuous support mechanisms, such as writing workshops and peer
mentorship programs, to sustain students' progress in mastering Standard English. By
equipping students with the necessary language skills, this study reinforces the
importance of overcoming linguistic barriers to ensure success in academic and
professional settings
Description:
A thesis in the department of Theatre Arts, School of Creative Arts,
submitted to the School of Graduate Studies, in partial fulfilment
of the requirements for award of the
Master of Philosophy
(Theatre Arts)
in University of Education, Winneba
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